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I’ve re-translated “Hisho no Tori (丕緒の鳥)”.

   As promised in my earlier post, I’m re-translating three short stories, Hisho no Tori (丕緒の鳥), Hyōhaku (漂舶), and Rakushō no Goku (落照の獄).

   I’ve finished the re-translation of “Hisho no Tori (丕緒の鳥)”, so, I’ve released my second edition. At this time, I added some phrases forgotten to translate (^^;) and I read my English version by myself again and again before my re-translation. You can find any improvements about this edition, can’t you? I worry about it very much.

   By the way, now, I use Prolonged Sound Mark for a long vowel when I romanize some nouns. For example, ō, ū.

   Oh! I almost forgot to write. Eugene Woodbury started translating “Tonan no Tsubasa (図南の翼)” on October 18, 2012. You can read it, here.

8 replies on “I’ve re-translated “Hisho no Tori (丕緒の鳥)”.”

I already copied it. As soon as I have time to check it out, I’ll send you some feedback.
You have no idea how happy the Eugene Woodbury translation makes me. He’s great. I’m sure he’ll do a great job for a great book. Can’t wait to start reading it! XD

> As soon as I have time to check it out, I’ll send you some feedback.

Oh! yes. Thanks a lot.

> You have no idea how happy the Eugene Woodbury translation makes me.

I’m glad to hear that. But his translation is still in progress. Be patient!

> I’ll be patient… joyfully patient.

Not so long!!! Because he’s so fast, “Tonan no tsubasa” is a long story though.

Hi O6asan,

> I added some phrases forgotten to translate (^^;)

Haha. I’ll read it again then 🙂

> Eugene Woodbury started translating “Tonan no Tsubasa

Cool! I like his translations

I take the chance to tell you that my sister’s friend arrived from Japan and I have the books right here. Now the only thing I need is to learn Japanese ^_^

Bye bye

Hi gkatar,

>> I added some phrases forgotten to translate (^^;)
> Haha. I’ll read it again then 🙂

Not many phrases. I wonder it is worth for re-reading my English only for it (^^;).

> I take the chance to tell you that my sister’s friend arrived from Japan and I have the books
> right here. Now the only thing I need is to learn Japanese ^_^

Oh, nice!! You need to try hard p(^o^)q.

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